As some of you who follow me on twitter may already know, I’m on a New Adult kick lately and of course topping my TBR list is going to be those titles hitting the NYT e-book list because obviously those are all well liked and many are self-published and I’m constantly on the search for great YA/NA books that are selling for $2.99/$3.99.

Not to mention the fact that Mark Perini (aka-Model Jackson) and I have finished our New Adult novel, HALFWAY PERFECT and I’ve already got a love for writing characters that are 18+ years old. So NA books have been on my mind a lot lately.

Yesterday, on reddit I did a little analysis on what I believe is the formula found with all the current top NA titles. You can check that out here if you’d like and no this isn’t some genius thing I discovered, it’s just putting what’s already been stated in various articles into accessible, usable terms.

Today I’m talking about WAIT FOR YOU by J. Lynn.

GOODREADS SUMMARY: 

Some things are worth waiting for…

Traveling thousands of miles from home to enter college is the only way nineteen-year-old Avery Morgansten can escape what happened at the Halloween party five years ago—an event that forever changed her life. All she needs to do is make it to her classes on time, make sure the bracelet on her left wrist stays in place, not draw any attention to herself, and maybe—please God—make a few friends, because surely that would be a nice change of pace. The one thing she didn’t need and never planned on was capturing the attention of the one guy who could shatter the precarious future she’s building for herself.

Some things are worth experiencing…

Cameron Hamilton is six feet and three inches of swoon-worthy hotness, complete with a pair of striking blue eyes and a remarkable ability to make her want things she believed were irrevocably stolen from her. She knows she needs to stay away from him, but Cam is freaking everywhere, with his charm, his witty banter, and that damn dimple that’s just so… so lickable. Getting involved with him is dangerous, but when ignoring the simmering tension that sparks whenever they are around each other becomes impossible, he brings out a side of her she never knew existed.

Some things should never be kept quiet…

But when Avery starts receiving threatening emails and phone calls forcing her to face a past she wants silenced, she has no other choice but to acknowledge that someone is refusing to allow her to let go of that night when everything changed. When the devastating truth comes out, will she resurface this time with one less scar? And can Cam be there to help her or will he be dragged down with her?

And some things are worth fighting for…

**review contains mild spoilers!

MY THOUGHTS: At first it took me just a bit to get into it, it was kind of like learning to drive manual transmission and grinding and cranking through those first couple of gears and then suddenly I was in 4th gear, cruising down the high way, 120% invested in the story. I feel like she hit all the main elements of the formula really well. I think I’m going to review the book by laying it against this formula.

EXTERNAL ELEMENTS: 

1) Since her book is already out we don’t have to worry about this author writing fast enough to catch this NA wave. She’s caught it.

2) It’s got the 3 word fragment title

3) Gorgeous, Gorgeous cover! Zoomed in couple embracing that just says “you’re my soul-mate forever and ever.” It gives me warm fuzzies and it feels dark and epic at the same time like I know I’m about to go on a painful emotional yet rewarding journey with these people.

“When I see something I like, I gotta… I love it.”–The Notebook

STORY ELEMENTS:

Girl MC – Avery definitely comes with a hefty load of baggage. *spoiler!* she’s the victim of sexual assault that happened five years previously and there’s a bunch more high school/family drama to add to that baggage too. She’s now 19 and starting college. Even though the weight on her shoulders is heavy, we see inner strength, her potential to fight for what she wants in the fact that she’s moved far away from home against her parent’s wishes and she’s cut her self off from them financially. As far as the innocence goes, Avery’s not been in a relationship before OR been willingly physical with guys before so she’s got that covered perfectly and the best part is, unlike Anastasia Steel, I believed Avery’s innocence 100%. To me, there wasn’t any other way for her to be because of what she’s been through.

Guy MC – Cam oh Cam…Cameron is quite the fictional boy, let me tell you. But just a warning, he’s no Christian Gray so if you’re into that sort of character…you know what? I don’t care if you’re not into nice boys, give Cam a chance maybe you’ll change your mind. Cam is so perfect for Avery. She’s got so much darkness in her past and Cam’s like the cool aloe stuff that you put on after getting a sun burn. And he hits the main formula elements for Guy MCs, mysterious and hot.

“I want all of you, forever, you and me, every day.”–The Notebook

Setting – College campus in West Virginia. Totally fits.

Sexual Tension – This is spot on perfect! What’s so beautiful about this particular aspect of WAIT FOR YOU is that Avery has truly feared physical contact for five years and to watch her slowly unravel and finally not just accept but crave these natural human needs is so real. And then to watch her draw back and kinda freak out about these changes in her, it’s raw and emotional and I felt it every step of the way, even when she infuriated me with her resistance, I got it.

“I could be fun, if you want. I could be pensive. I could be whatever you want. You just tell me what you want, and I’m gonna be that for you.”–The Notebook

Forward Motion – This aspect of WAIT FOR YOU, making sure that it’s an emotional connection that leads to the resolution of all the sexual tension built in the beginning of the story, is done perfectly. I wanted that for Avery so much by the time we get to that point in the book, but the real genius came *spoiler!* when J. Lynn decided to have Avery explore sexual need on her own before letting Cam really touch her and this, to me, felt safe and appropriate. She thinks about Cam touching while touching herself, which I normally would skim over in a review because it’s dirty talk…lol. But here, in the context of this story, it was almost like therapy, like visualization, getting her to open the door and truly overcome her fears because of the assault that happened 5 years ago. It’s like the opposite of how sexual assault was handled in this other book I reviewed.

Sex – And by sex, I just mean any form of physical love. WAIT FOR YOU has plenty of awesome detail and description and obviously it hits that important point of being a new, and better experience for Avery at least. I think it is for Cam too, he seemed to enjoy it just fine. But it’s all tied to epic love that has layers of depth so it doesn’t feel cheap. It’s beautiful.

“You’re gonna kill me woman! I need sleep, I need food, to regain my strength!”

Other Dudes – There’s a boy who gets a little grabby with Avery at a party and that creates tension with Cam and allows him to show his primal, stake-my-claim-on-her side but it’s not over-the-top as I’ve seen if plenty of books in the genre. Also, there’s the guy who assaulted Avery. He might not be on the pages but he’s constantly taking up space in Avery’s mind and he’s always coming between Avery and Cam. But there’s no triangle so don’t worry!

“If it’s with him, go. Go! I lost you once, I think I can do it again. If I thought that’s what you really wanted. But don’t you take the easy way out.”–The Notebook

Push The Limits – This element is more subtle in WAIT FOR YOU which suits my personal tastes better. However *spoiler!* Cam does have a temperamental side that he skillfully keeps hidden almost all the time. Normally, I very wary of the temperamental/possessive Christian Gray and Edward Cullen type guy characters, but Cam’s not like that. He’s smart, sweet, charming and Avery comes into the story very uptight and jumpy but Cam makes her relax, she feels safe around him so he’s not intense like Christian and Edward or Travis from Beautiful Disaster. Hearing that Cam had a violent incident of his own in the past actually made me feel relieved. I secretly wanted him to be able to protect Avery and do anything he had to do to make sure she stayed safe. Maybe that’s really not the healthiest thing to hope for their relationship but I can’t help how I feel and that’s why this element of the story, though frowned upon by many is absolutely crucial to giving the story that epic, addicting, page turning feel. We can pretend we’re against the Alfa-Male instinct all we want but the reality is, this flaw in Cam’s past, the potential for him to repeat the behavior if any threatens his family or his one-true love really made the story have that depth it needs.

“Do you think our love can make miracles?”–The Notebook

The Wall Between Them – Avery and Cam’s wall is her past and her inability to tell Cam what happened to her. I got so frustrated and pissed off at Avery during several points in the story where Cam just begged her to open up and she refused. She lied, she ran from him. But what made this work is that Cam would get frustrated at the same time as me and I liked that he showed some human insecurity and backed off at times when he’d had enough. But the payoff, the growth, was truly rewarding.

“What easy way? There is no easy way, no matter what I do, somebody gets hurt.”–The Notebook


HEA – Happily ever after. I won’t spoil that but I’m sure you can guess. However there’s some really cool and rewarding aspects to the ending that I thoroughly enjoyed.

“If you’re a bird, I’m a bird.”–The Notebook

 
I’m giving WAIT FOR YOU by J. Lynn 5 out of 5 stars! Highly recommended for those who love Mature YA contemporary and New Adult.

ABOUT THE AUTHOR

Buy WAIT FOR YOU from Amazon

Jennifer L. Armentrout/ J. Lynn is a New York Times and USA Today Bestselling Author

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7 Comments

  1. reem hardan March 19, 2013 at 4:18 pm - Reply

    Great review. I really liked the pictures you put of The Note Book!!! So fitting for the book! !!

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  3. Lori T. March 21, 2013 at 8:17 pm - Reply

    I've been reading some new NA lately and not really liking most of what I'm reading. WAIT FOR YOU definitely sounds like something I'd enjoy. I don't know about anyone else, but most of the NA I'm reading is the same: poor girl, rich guy. Guy is out of this world handsome, six pack abs, and money coming out of his ears, oh and he's a complete jerk, but girl falls in love with him anyway, even though his best friend/brother/cousin/etc is WAY more likeable than him and much more swoon-worthy. But virgin girl goes for the bad guy who treats her like crap, let's her see she doesn't belong in his world, but quickly falls in love with her, even though he's probably gonna get it on with a few other girls first. And even though she has no experience in bed, she instantly goes head-first into wild, kinky sex that she wouldn't have had with her first boyfriend that she's known since childhood, yet this guy she's known for days/weeks, anything goes. Oh, and not to mention when the bad guy lays claim to said-girl's, umm, lady parts as his own and no one else's, and watches her in public because he's completely possessive of every bit of her (and she's OK with it.) Ummm…no that's not sexy, it's crazy-obsessive. And like Anastasia in 50 Shades, the so-called virgins in these books are not at all believable (and why is that a trend?) There's a new NA series (that I won't name because I don't want to offend anyone, but the 2 books annoyed me so much that I wanted to throw my Kindle across the room), but it's wildly popular and I can't wrap my head around why. It's that scenario I just mentioned, and it's not that the two fall in love, it's just crazy-wild lust with no depth to the characters or real believable emotion (nothing like our swoon-worthy couple from THE NOTEBOOK who actually work at discovering each other, and not just the lustful side of a relationship.) Am I wrong in wishing for the good guy for a change? The nice guy who'd never treat a girl like crap at first just because he's secretly into her? That's what I enjoyed about your series, Julie. Jackson's not a jerk and never tossed Holly's emotions around for his own benefit. I'm really tired of reading that in any genre, whether it's NA, YA or adult.

  4. Julie Cross March 22, 2013 at 3:29 pm - Reply

    Lori,

    Thanks for the nice comment about Jackson! You'd be surprised how many people didn't like Jackson and said he was too much of an asshole in the beginning. I've decided this is because readers get to hear his thoughts and they're human and they show that he's confused and he has some growing to do.

    After reading your thoughts on recent NA, I think you'll enjoy WAIT FOR YOU more than those other books. Cam is a nice guy and any of those alpha male moments he has in the book you'll totally be cheering him on, given the situation.

  5. Lori T. March 23, 2013 at 12:42 am - Reply

    Really? I never, ever got that feeling with Jackson. He seemed so genuine, so human, that any mistakes that he did make, I totally got them, got where he was coming from. No one's perfect, and he exemplified that, yet he was very likeable and easy to root for. Jackson's the kinda guy I wish I had dated back in college (seriously, where WAS a guy like Jackson back then?!?)

    I get it, people have their own opinions about what they prefer to read, and I think that's great. It should be that way. I just don't get the appeal of certain characters that are written to be believable, yet are so absurd in their situations and decisions that, I actually believe more in unicorns and mermaids than I do these people. Said novel I mentioned above was like that. I prefer the nice guy over the jerk bad boy anyday. Sure, those alpha-male moments can be hot, but only from a genuine nice guy, not the caveman, puff his chest out and show his dominance type guy. And Cam sounds like the kind of guy in a NA novel I'd prefer to read (flaws and all.) (I actually had a conversation with a teen reader today about the novel I mentioned and she was so appalled by it that she deleted it from her Kindle. Sad thing, the author is mostly known for her YA and, like this reader, I had NO idea this NA novel had VERY explicit sex scenes and language in it. She felt like she was reading a porn with a male MC that no young woman should fawn/obsess over or should look up to the things the female MC was doing and should've known better. I was embarrassed for this girl.)

    I'll def. download WAIT FOR YOU on my Kindle this weekend. Thanks for the recommendation, Julie!

  6. Heather Anastasiu March 25, 2013 at 2:50 am - Reply

    I just finished WAIT FOR YOU tonight and loved it. I'm totally enjoying your breakdown of the formula too. I tend to pick a genre and then binge read it until the patterns become super apparent. I took about four months away from NA then have come back seeing what tasty things have been written in the meantime. This one was at the top of my list. And hell yeah, you're writing NA? I wanna read!!!

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